tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2342037019437865034.post1204614890564360388..comments2023-09-17T07:30:00.254-07:00Comments on The Jaded Heart Still Beats: Shattered (Mag 8)Lisahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05440632162084471888noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2342037019437865034.post-3862886176348482412010-04-07T18:39:04.860-07:002010-04-07T18:39:04.860-07:00Nice take on the prompt!Nice take on the prompt!Vicki Lanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08114677510459055768noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2342037019437865034.post-11115772645608923522010-04-06T15:57:41.663-07:002010-04-06T15:57:41.663-07:00Preach it sistah...stay away from those that use a...Preach it sistah...stay away from those that use and take! This is a different take on the prompt and I like it!steviewrenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14233066158555762167noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2342037019437865034.post-84319572633479340422010-04-06T13:39:03.969-07:002010-04-06T13:39:03.969-07:00Oh this is excellent. Your images are excellent a...Oh this is excellent. Your images are excellent and I love the mystical feel of an old style morality tale. Love it.Jenniferhttp://www.jensrealia.typepad.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2342037019437865034.post-54822811507918913542010-04-05T13:46:03.483-07:002010-04-05T13:46:03.483-07:00your prose could almost loop back to the first lin...your prose could almost loop back to the first line...created by the masters hand (again)...lovely.Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2342037019437865034.post-41092297894273380512010-04-05T07:51:52.256-07:002010-04-05T07:51:52.256-07:00We both wrote about lost love - very nice!We both wrote about lost love - very nice!The Bughttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07509037206264761261noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2342037019437865034.post-16752453819446945922010-04-05T06:20:29.615-07:002010-04-05T06:20:29.615-07:00Beautiful comparison -- "Shattered egg, much ...Beautiful comparison -- "Shattered egg, much like the heart"<br />The heart wants what it wants, even at the price of pain.<br /><br />Joannyjoannahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03338150531816845279noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2342037019437865034.post-36922895347682502402010-04-04T19:06:38.483-07:002010-04-04T19:06:38.483-07:00I like the heart being fragile like the egg. Nice ...I like the heart being fragile like the egg. Nice one.Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2342037019437865034.post-16333712744335522812010-04-04T17:04:18.981-07:002010-04-04T17:04:18.981-07:00I have been there. Love's indeed delicate. Ve...I have been there. Love's indeed delicate. Very well done, Lisa.Angie Muresanhttp://www.angiemuresan.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2342037019437865034.post-4474446696120365332010-04-04T16:08:33.952-07:002010-04-04T16:08:33.952-07:00Well done! A reminder of the fragility of life an...Well done! A reminder of the fragility of life and love! <br /><br />RickR. Burnett Bakerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08743367086298298786noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2342037019437865034.post-12260449040814824062010-04-04T10:53:27.988-07:002010-04-04T10:53:27.988-07:00Yup, I have a daughter just like that.
Well crafte...Yup, I have a daughter just like that.<br />Well crafted poemPeter Gouldinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13292063172122249202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2342037019437865034.post-37868068802496044142010-04-03T23:23:03.338-07:002010-04-03T23:23:03.338-07:00A good metaphor.A good metaphor.spacedlawhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12462723005560128474noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2342037019437865034.post-67912658253405802852010-04-03T15:15:56.802-07:002010-04-03T15:15:56.802-07:00Terrific imagery, tender and wise. Nice read!Terrific imagery, tender and wise. Nice read!Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.com