tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2342037019437865034.post3979716638178212200..comments2023-09-17T07:30:00.254-07:00Comments on The Jaded Heart Still Beats: RemnantLisahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05440632162084471888noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2342037019437865034.post-34113817278863230482010-05-20T17:58:02.617-07:002010-05-20T17:58:02.617-07:00Jingle has an award for you here:
http://jingleya...Jingle has an award for you here:<br /><br />http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/05/18/awards-from-wordwand-trisha-and-more/<br /><br />Great job!<br /><br />Tim Keeton<br />(Undead)Poet / Wizard / Teller-of-taleTim Keetonhttp://undeadpoets.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2342037019437865034.post-67553465518668584292010-05-19T16:40:27.506-07:002010-05-19T16:40:27.506-07:00Lisa,
I was horrified that she let the plate fall...Lisa, <br />I was horrified that she let the plate fall but it is a GREAT ending! I wouldn't change it. :D<br /><br />Do you rent out your muse? Mine is such a grouchy wench. (haha)Pam (The Reader)http://www.anovelapproachto.menoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2342037019437865034.post-40674921930088274332010-05-18T14:57:48.858-07:002010-05-18T14:57:48.858-07:00Thanks for taking us on a nice journey through a l...Thanks for taking us on a nice journey through a life. Excellent take on the Magpie Tale.Ladrón de Basura (a.k.a. Junk Thief)https://www.blogger.com/profile/13051974174001458812noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2342037019437865034.post-21124142333572620142010-05-18T05:40:35.799-07:002010-05-18T05:40:35.799-07:00Superb Magpie. I understand maybe the marriage was...Superb Magpie. I understand maybe the marriage was over, but too bad about the plate! i like how you raised the readers' hopes that maybe it would work out cause the plate was intact and then, well,broken plate so maybe not.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2342037019437865034.post-9971792123440948282010-05-17T16:04:19.238-07:002010-05-17T16:04:19.238-07:00remarkable tale!remarkable tale!Jinglehttp://www.jingleyanqiu.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2342037019437865034.post-23803692095025990982010-05-17T08:18:16.831-07:002010-05-17T08:18:16.831-07:00gorgeous header you've chosen!!gorgeous header you've chosen!!Sherihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16360494347587103696noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2342037019437865034.post-80815847539242087582010-05-17T05:27:44.561-07:002010-05-17T05:27:44.561-07:00Touching story. Super opening line! Well done.Touching story. Super opening line! Well done.Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2342037019437865034.post-3945182798555104212010-05-16T20:28:19.603-07:002010-05-16T20:28:19.603-07:00Every thing has it's opposite while love is ki...Every thing has it's opposite while love is kissing you <br />hate is asleep in your bed..a powerful tale there milady very powerful indeed. <br /><br />Remains me of the intensity that the 1989 movie 'The War of The Roses' with the married couple try everything to get each other to leave the house in a vicious divorce battle. No winners!joannahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03338150531816845279noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2342037019437865034.post-44929375959059618482010-05-16T17:22:15.287-07:002010-05-16T17:22:15.287-07:00wow youre a writer, girl!
So many wonderful phrase...wow youre a writer, girl!<br />So many wonderful phrases and images<br />and the ending....what a great muse you have<br />can I borrow her sometime<br />last lines in a short short story a twist...love itSuzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10329289442910294160noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2342037019437865034.post-89917615894261846372010-05-16T13:58:54.365-07:002010-05-16T13:58:54.365-07:00Lisa, it may seem downbeat but then again.. She le...Lisa, it may seem downbeat but then again.. She let go of the plate which to me, means a fresh start.. No bad/sad memories of that plate... A lot of keepsakes can also hold one back in moving forward especially if they keep going back and looking at them..Kalei's Best Friendhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12331539743751163269noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2342037019437865034.post-21626487295957779522010-05-16T11:20:45.280-07:002010-05-16T11:20:45.280-07:00this makes me so sad. if there isn't hope in ...this makes me so sad. if there isn't hope in love, what DO we have hope in? such a beautiful, heartbreaking description!Heatherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08366702328848324866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2342037019437865034.post-10300262473607270472010-05-16T10:16:49.228-07:002010-05-16T10:16:49.228-07:00I really appreciate all the comments. I do realiz...I really appreciate all the comments. I do realize just how downbeat this is. My original story did not end this way. I spent hours writing this and editing it. It was during the last edit that my mysterious muse whispered into my ear the last line. When I first heard it, I was shocked and rebelled saying I would not write it. But alas, I am bound to my muse and write it I did.....Lisahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05440632162084471888noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2342037019437865034.post-43578386169996993952010-05-16T10:03:55.569-07:002010-05-16T10:03:55.569-07:00So downbeat, but beautifully done.So downbeat, but beautifully done.Berownehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09524661173663604641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2342037019437865034.post-50495233213646554352010-05-16T05:43:06.511-07:002010-05-16T05:43:06.511-07:00incredible work, simply marvelous magpie! so full ...incredible work, simply marvelous magpie! so full of volcanic eruptions and dreams of better days to come, abruptly coming to an end once gravity took hold of that precious plate. this was magnificent and so well done!Sherihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16360494347587103696noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2342037019437865034.post-55219447909583379602010-05-16T03:37:05.248-07:002010-05-16T03:37:05.248-07:00I love your descriptions. Raw and vivid.I love your descriptions. Raw and vivid.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11682590088361102336noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2342037019437865034.post-17958084188160853662010-05-16T01:05:05.792-07:002010-05-16T01:05:05.792-07:00Very good! Excellent writing, can't wait for m...Very good! Excellent writing, can't wait for more!Vanessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00034759853236826891noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2342037019437865034.post-48636783194381495742010-05-15T20:05:27.800-07:002010-05-15T20:05:27.800-07:00I love how you used the history of your great-gran...I love how you used the history of your great-grandmother's plate as a link to what was happening in real time. Nice job & thank you for coming to visit me.Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2342037019437865034.post-9648421743899262512010-05-15T19:45:32.339-07:002010-05-15T19:45:32.339-07:00ouch. this one stings...cant give up hope...it lea...ouch. this one stings...cant give up hope...it leaves me with little else...<br /><br />nicely written lisa...stirs the emotions...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2342037019437865034.post-720347663010465412010-05-15T19:16:03.210-07:002010-05-15T19:16:03.210-07:00Like a phoenix rising from the ashes of broken dia...Like a phoenix rising from the ashes of broken diaries, she rises to a new day; of which, her path lay better paved from yesterdays ☼Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2342037019437865034.post-72497643835579129662010-05-15T15:34:03.067-07:002010-05-15T15:34:03.067-07:00The china plate survived through so many difficult...The china plate survived through so many difficult times. The heartache and the hope is well done.Paul Chttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01836602667355512504noreply@blogger.com