Temptation of forbidden fruit, lured to soul-catchers of Ceylon blue
Adonis with raven hair vies to consume completely
Should have been any other,
but not him
any other than him
Refusal to forsake, to turn away, to walk away, to run away
head held high, leaving well enough alone
Should have been any other,
but not him
anyone other than him
Weakness of spirit, caution swayed by the careless madness
longing for tender touch and impassioned embrace
Should have been any other,
but not him
any other than him
Surrender to most primal calling, inner stirrings erupt and unbridled
passion’s denouement, but for a brief and measured time
Should have been any other,
but not him
any other than him
Wreckage from the surrender, hearts shattered, lives razed to ruin
obliteration, all gladly given just for the touch of the youthful god
Should have been any other,
but not him
any other than him
Friday, May 21, 2010
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2 comments:
Shoulda, woulda, coulda... bottom line, hurt is hurt.
Lisa, great work on this poem. You've kept your wording tight (i.e. no unnecessary words) and convey the story well. I like the ending "gladly given for the touch of the youthful god". Very nice indeed! :)
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