plucked
from the vine
in the splendor
of youth and fullness
consumed
all in the name
of want and satisfaction
by another
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Song of the Thorn Bird
Heartbeats
The Hidden Heart
- Lisa
- Crunchy Faux-nola? I am a hypocrite hippie...kinda crunchy...a girl trying to go green, but not always getting it done. In one hand I have organic fruit, essential oils, & apple cider vinegar, while the other holds a Whataburger #1 Combo on a white bun. I want to save the earth, eat naturally, go organic, and do all that I can to be a better human on this big blue marble...."the spirit is willing, but the flesh is weak... the wallet run lows on cash...and there's only 24 hours in a day." I know I can do better, but right now that is my best. Living the good life with a side of crunchy faux-nola!
18 comments:
that;s your typical tomater....nice Magpie!
Sounds just right to me!
sounds like instant gratification..bkm
Such wonderful imagery, 'plucked from the vine.' Almost sounds as though it was ravaged!
Christine
but it does not seem her fault the way it was written as if done to her...which is sad...nice magpie.
We both had the same feelings when we wrote our piece for the prompt. Yours is beautiful. :-)
sounds like a broken heart to me:(
sad but nice magpie
Sums up - perfectly - how I feel about the tomato. Nice writing!
A ripe little peice bursting with truth. Great Magpie. Thank you for sharing.
Loved loved loved it! :)
oh no, you've been reading my mail!! your magpie was so well written, one i could truly sink my teeth into ;) you are a joy to visit, lisa, so glad your computer is up and running again :)
well put.
Sumptuous little magpie...
Lisa,
pomme d'amour!
need I say more?
Ooh - I love all the meanings I've read in your little beauty. Lovely job Lisa.
I could do with a chomp right now....!
Nicely done my friend! :D Concise, and yet and layered with meaning. :D
just stopping by to say hello, my friend! hope that you're doing well and having a wonderful summer, so far...take care :)
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