Song of the Thorn Bird

Song of the Thorn Bird

Thursday, July 1, 2010

Fireworks



















His kiss
firecracker that bursts from the soul
upon his burning mouth
to her waiting, wanton lips
connecting two
     two bodies, two souls
Her rapture


Post inspired by Magpie Tales.  Go visit and join in the fun today.  This is my first post here in a month and I am so ready to get back into action!

27 comments:

Helen said...

Now this is a Magpie I can totally embrace ~ you have assured me it's 'our little secret' ... nice writing.

Brigid said...

Very sultry piece.
Enjoyed my visit to your blog, love your photo and the name of your blog, one of my favourite books is also Rebecca.

Robert Lloyd said...

A short sensual provactive piece that I enjoyed very much. Rapture indeed! Thank you for sahring and I love your Blog Design.

Greyscale Territory said...

Details the sensual drama of a precious moment! Love hyow the poem gravitates from "his kiess" to "her rapture".

Stafford Ray said...

You fibber! No 'jaded heart' wrote this steamy verse! LoL.

brenda w said...

Provocative Magpie. Clever to go from his kiss to her rapture. I love it.

Catherine said...

All I can do is sing that song by The Pierces.

Love ya!

Heather said...

i loved this-- and i am SO GLAD that you are back. xo

R. Burnett Baker said...

POW!! This is a HOT poem that really pops! Nice one!

Rick

Patience said...

I loved 'firecracker that bursts from the soul' what an amazing image! This is def one of my fave magpies so far, really good job.

soundoffreedom said...

nice magpie exploding with passion!

Gabriela Abalo said...

I love it!!

loveNlight

Gabi

signed...bkm said...

Lovely Magpie of a Kiss...bkm

willow said...

A sizzler!!

ninotaziz said...

WOW! Here's to the firecracker kiss!

ninotaziz said...

By the way, love your blog. Arising from a jaded heart, a beautiful sanctuary flourishes.

Well done!

kathew said...

Hot! Loved it!

Brian Miller said...

oh, sensual piece...and after seeing the pics on the other blog hope it was good for you...smiles.

JeffScape said...

Ooh... I quite like this. Less is a lot more. Excellent.

Tumblewords: said...

Sizzler!

nancy said...

wow - i'm a tad terrified that we might be parts of the same person... and yet it's lovely to find you! (was going for the twitter account for my blog ladyWanderlust.com - but you already have it - and I am SO glad that i found you)!!! :)

Caty said...

very short...very hot. nice magpie!

PattiKen said...

Sizzling hot, just like the firecrackers and the weather on the 4th of July!

RA said...

Hot!

rel said...

Lisa,
Hotter than a fourth of July fire cracker: just the way I like 'm
rel

sheri said...

oh yeah, and you're back with a bang!! i've missed you...lousy computers! can't wait to hear much, much more from you now...

Lanie said...

a kiss that causes an Explosion! nice!