Thursday, July 1, 2010
Fireworks
His kiss
firecracker that bursts from the soul
upon his burning mouth
to her waiting, wanton lips
connecting two
two bodies, two souls
Her rapture
Post inspired by Magpie Tales. Go visit and join in the fun today. This is my first post here in a month and I am so ready to get back into action!
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27 comments:
Now this is a Magpie I can totally embrace ~ you have assured me it's 'our little secret' ... nice writing.
Very sultry piece.
Enjoyed my visit to your blog, love your photo and the name of your blog, one of my favourite books is also Rebecca.
A short sensual provactive piece that I enjoyed very much. Rapture indeed! Thank you for sahring and I love your Blog Design.
Details the sensual drama of a precious moment! Love hyow the poem gravitates from "his kiess" to "her rapture".
You fibber! No 'jaded heart' wrote this steamy verse! LoL.
Provocative Magpie. Clever to go from his kiss to her rapture. I love it.
All I can do is sing that song by The Pierces.
Love ya!
i loved this-- and i am SO GLAD that you are back. xo
POW!! This is a HOT poem that really pops! Nice one!
Rick
I loved 'firecracker that bursts from the soul' what an amazing image! This is def one of my fave magpies so far, really good job.
nice magpie exploding with passion!
I love it!!
loveNlight
Gabi
Lovely Magpie of a Kiss...bkm
A sizzler!!
WOW! Here's to the firecracker kiss!
By the way, love your blog. Arising from a jaded heart, a beautiful sanctuary flourishes.
Well done!
Hot! Loved it!
oh, sensual piece...and after seeing the pics on the other blog hope it was good for you...smiles.
Ooh... I quite like this. Less is a lot more. Excellent.
Sizzler!
wow - i'm a tad terrified that we might be parts of the same person... and yet it's lovely to find you! (was going for the twitter account for my blog ladyWanderlust.com - but you already have it - and I am SO glad that i found you)!!! :)
very short...very hot. nice magpie!
Sizzling hot, just like the firecrackers and the weather on the 4th of July!
Hot!
Lisa,
Hotter than a fourth of July fire cracker: just the way I like 'm
rel
oh yeah, and you're back with a bang!! i've missed you...lousy computers! can't wait to hear much, much more from you now...
a kiss that causes an Explosion! nice!
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